(Sorry for not responding sooner, homework ate my brain ;))
I really do feel like the story's not done--it needs a second part or a sequel. I'm not sure where the plot would go, though. Needs more thought. *hmm*
I went back and checked the POV, you're right: I need to fix that. Thanks for pointing that out! ♥ ♥
I'm so very glad you're enjoying it. This universe is totally nuts and off the wall, I'm just glad it's working :)
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Date: 2011-02-17 12:22 am (UTC)I really do feel like the story's not done--it needs a second part or a sequel. I'm not sure where the plot would go, though. Needs more thought. *hmm*
I went back and checked the POV, you're right: I need to fix that. Thanks for pointing that out! ♥ ♥
I'm so very glad you're enjoying it. This universe is totally nuts and off the wall, I'm just glad it's working :)