(Sorry for not responding sooner, homework ate my brain ;))

I really do feel like the story's not done--it needs a second part or a sequel. I'm not sure where the plot would go, though. Needs more thought. *hmm*

I went back and checked the POV, you're right: I need to fix that. Thanks for pointing that out! ♥ ♥

I'm so very glad you're enjoying it. This universe is totally nuts and off the wall, I'm just glad it's working :)