Wow, this worked really well. I mean, you can tell that it's two different people in the beginning, but as soon as they meet up, it really blends. Wow, I didn't expect it to do that as well as it did.
BTW, I'm Raelity Cayne on FF.net, if you want a name to put to the taste in media. : )
Also, you've got a bit of a spacing problem - there's a larger space between paragraphs that one person has written than between the switching of POVs. Since I'm assuming you just copypasta'd, is it fixable or an annoying computer thingie? And there are a few typos, but don't bother with them unless someone else points them out, if they don't notice it's less work for you. ; )
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Date: 2011-01-11 12:58 am (UTC)BTW, I'm Raelity Cayne on FF.net, if you want a name to put to the taste in media. : )
Also, you've got a bit of a spacing problem - there's a larger space between paragraphs that one person has written than between the switching of POVs. Since I'm assuming you just copypasta'd, is it fixable or an annoying computer thingie? And there are a few typos, but don't bother with them unless someone else points them out, if they don't notice it's less work for you. ; )
Have you ever heard of Axis Powers: Hetalia?